Jay-Z's Run This Town: A Rap-Sponse (STILL IN THE WORKS)

Here's the vid.

(Still iffy on the "hook" but I just wanted something to go over Rihanna's part but whatevs)

You are, oh you said it you are
Are what, what's with the stutt-ar
Yeah, you know I see ya
Clownin' like on Hee-Haw
So I can call you Caesar?
I'm thinkin' not brah
But you call me the czar
You know when I'm rollin' in my car
Yeah I got my shades on, but you know I'm still lookin' hard
Livin' life right now, while you livin' off very far
Far from reality
But this is actuality
If you want to come back, leave your current mentality
Before you suffer a fatality
Or perhaps a flawless victory
Take a step back, maybe then you will see
I tried to remain in a state of neutrality
But you've pushed my morality
To a state of informality
No longer formal
No longer normal
Now just lyrical brutality
Brutally honest, Honestly brutal
Any attempt at respect, to me, seems to be futile

[Chorus]

One more time, here I am
One more time, here we go
What we doin' gettin' money
What we doin' makin' dough
Can't forget where I'm from
Can't forget my home
I'mma ask for one thing
Listen close and take note
So note me, note us
Take notice, how we rock the bus
Bump us out all the cars
From here to very far
Even on the planes, trains, and automobiles
PhatWood and DP signin' them record deals
Life so glamorous, it seems surreal
So real, livin' life to the max, ya'll know how I feel


*stuck here for now, will keep at it*